looks to be a tad bit to low but its not bad at all it still looks great, I have seen some that are ridiculously low hair lines on some people, Just make sure you dont make it more dense bc that would make it look even lower, I think your best bet is to remove some of multi hair grafts on the hair line and exvhange them with singles to soften it up, I think that would make a difference, Ask a high qaulified sergeon, thats your best bet