I'm sorry for my blunt input, but it's honest feedback: you need a second procedure to establish a hairline with only single grafts, and also create more irregularities in the hairline. The way it is now, it looks pluggy and straight = not natural. You might need to punch out multis in the hairline.
It puzzles me to see almost only multi grafts in the hairline. If I were you, I would only seek out the very best of surgeons for your repair surgery. Before that, of course, you should sort out the redness and/or folliculitis with a dermatologist.