I Can see the thinning in the donor Area. It looks like shockloss combined with grafts taken out.
I mean, you do have less hair in the donor than before the HT obviesly, because they took Them out, but i still Think it looks to thin in donor area. It shouldnt look that thin with that number of grafts IMO.
Reciepted area looks ok, clearly you have some sort of hairline now allthough its still thin but in 2-3 Month it should grow thicker