Site review

[mbfloyd]

Hi all,

 

I have been working on a hair restoration website, (promotional link removed)

 

I'm am trying to add the information that someone who is interested in a hair system would want to know.

 

It would really help if you could look it over and let me know your impressions and suggestions.

 

Thanks

 

-Mike

[Beemark]

You asked for honest opinions and impressions, so here goes:

 

If your goal is to be super-slick and mislead your clients like several other sites, you've done it well. You have avoided using the word "hairpiece" and don't really tell prospective clients what you are selling. Do you know the old marketing saying - "Sell the sizzle, not the steak"? That's what you're doing.

 

I'm sure you will be successful in attracting a lot of desperate guys who will think you're selling something new and different.

 

Personally, I have a lot more respect for companies who tell it like it is.

[mbfloyd]

Ok so you think that if the site where to show the "hair replacement system" to be a professional adhered undetectable hair piece, that it would be better.

 

I tend to agree I'll add that to my list of suggestions for my manager.