1. They have placed hair in the back much too far apart. Even if they grow 100% it's gonna look like nothing was done here.
2. Even in the hairline where the grafts are relatively dense, the growth is poor.
In general, you need to visit a proper hair transplant surgeon for getting assessed. As spacing to this extent and in this stage of hair loss, seems a littles ridiculous.
Ps: I don't understand why people resist do much to accept that make pattern hair loss is genetic. It is not a sign of defeat, rather would help in making a proper choice. I also wonder how come the clinic didn't tell you that it is a genetic problem?