IMO, It is tough to get coverage that hides scalp from a top view, but even your front view is some what see through. Either some grafts have not grown yet , will not grow Or the hair line is designed so. From your post op it looks like you have a large area covered for 3200 grafts, probably your hair line is designed so and your doctor is planning to give you more density in the second procedure. You have few morw months to wait. In any case this is not a very bad result.